"I'll invent an ice-cream maker!" (7.p.).
There is very interesting club! Ben, Chad, Bianca and Jodie attends that club every month and they bring their inventions. One day, Ben came up to invent ice-cream machine and brought many junks in that club. Of cause everyone didn't come up what he 'll make. They worried about Bens' invention , however he set up with junks and junks. Finally, he made an ice-cream machine and turned on that machines' power. However, he neglected to check work of that machine. It'll work correctly?
Reference
Brasch Nicolas. (2007). The Inventors' Club Meets Again. Victoria, Australia. Albaby, NewZealand. Toronto, Canada: Nelson Australia Pty Ltd
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Hi Takahiro,
ReplyDeleteWould you please review the model book reviews on the Writing Studio Blog, and pay careful attention to the composition of page references for your quotations?
Cheers, PB