Saturday, January 17, 2015

Karin's Presentation Review

I listened Karin's presentation at library on Tuesday, 15 Jan, at 12:40.

She introduced about Lacrosse and she gave a nice presentation. Her presentation material was simple and easy to understand. In addition, she speak slowly because she looked want to speak more good and detail information, so I could understand the contents of her presentation more than usual.

However, her voice was little bit small. I don't know the reason, but maybe she didn't memorize the presentation materials contents. Of cause, she could make a detail speech, however that speech wasn't along with the presentation material. I think, if she correct these small points, her presentation become more good.

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Ruka's Presentation Review

I listened Mili's presentation at 1231 on Tuesday, 15 Jan, at 12:15.

She presented about Fencing for me and her speech is very detail. She often care about the contents of speech, so she used simple words. In addition, she sometimes questioned about Fencing and she sometimes point at some sentences and graphics, so these points are so good for presentation.

However, Her speech has some week points. There were some slides which has few information in her presentation materials, so she might confused what she should speak at that time. I think if she decided the contents of speech, she can make a speech more fluently and detail more than before.

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Erika's Presentation Review

I listened Erika's presentation at 1121 on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 16:20.

She introduced about Ice Hockey and she gave a nice presentation for me. At first, she talked most important points at the beginning of presentation, so I could image the Ice Hockey games more easily. In addition, she introduced about concrete game rules, so I could have a lot of interesting for her presentation.

However, she was always looking at her presentation material during she giving a presentation. Checking memo is important, but I didn't feel good, so I think she should gain more chances of eye contacts. If she do this, most people might concentrate with her presentation.

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Ruka's Presentation Review

I listened Ruka's presentation at library on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 12:40.

Her presentation has many detail information about Paintball and she used many pictures in her presentation and she explained about these pictures, so I could enjoy her presentation. In addition, she sometimes worries about my opinions for her speech during she giving a presentation, so she talked little bit slowly because she worried about my understanding.

However, I think her voice was little small. If she give a presentation in front of many people, some people might can't hear what she saying. Moreover, her presentation material's sentences were little small. I felt uneasy about these points this time, so I think if she use more simple words and short sentences, more people might give good feelings.

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Akino's Presentation Review

I listened Akino's presentation at 1121 on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 12:15.

Her presentation was easy to understand and her presentation materials are simple. she explained all information which displayed on her smart phone, so her speech had no omissions. In addition, she used simple words. Her speech was little fast, but I could understand the contents of her presentation.

However, her presentation materials has some confused slides. There many information, so these slide was hard to see. I think gathering many information is important, so she should form these information more easy to see. I think, making something graphs is one of good way.

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