Karin's Presentation Review

I listened Karin's presentation at library on Tuesday, 15 Jan, at 12:40．

She introduced about Lacrosse and she gave a nice presentation. Her presentation material was simple and easy to understand. In addition, she speak slowly because she looked want to speak more good and detail information, so I could understand the contents of her presentation more than usual.

However, her voice was little bit small. I don't know the reason, but maybe she didn't memorize the presentation materials contents. Of cause, she could make a detail speech, however that speech wasn't along with the presentation material. I think, if she correct these small points, her presentation become more good.

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Ruka's Presentation Review

I listened Mili's presentation at 1231 on Tuesday, 15 Jan, at 12:15．

She presented about Fencing for me and her speech is very detail. She often care about the contents of speech, so she used simple words. In addition, she sometimes questioned about Fencing and she sometimes point at some sentences and graphics, so these points are so good for presentation.

However, Her speech has some week points. There were some slides which has few information in her presentation materials, so she might confused what she should speak at that time. I think if she decided the contents of speech, she can make a speech more fluently and detail more than before.

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Erika's Presentation Review

I listened Erika's presentation at 1121 on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 16:20．

She introduced about Ice Hockey and she gave a nice presentation for me. At first, she talked most important points at the beginning of presentation, so I could image the Ice Hockey games more easily. In addition, she introduced about concrete game rules, so I could have a lot of interesting for her presentation.

However, she was always looking at her presentation material during she giving a presentation. Checking memo is important, but I didn't feel good, so I think she should gain more chances of eye contacts. If she do this, most people might concentrate with her presentation.

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Ruka's Presentation Review

I listened Ruka's presentation at library on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 12:40．

Her presentation has many detail information about Paintball and she used many pictures in her presentation and she explained about these pictures, so I could enjoy her presentation. In addition, she sometimes worries about my opinions for her speech during she giving a presentation, so she talked little bit slowly because she worried about my understanding.

However, I think her voice was little small. If she give a presentation in front of many people, some people might can't hear what she saying. Moreover, her presentation material's sentences were little small. I felt uneasy about these points this time, so I think if she use more simple words and short sentences, more people might give good feelings.

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Akino's Presentation Review

I listened Akino's presentation at 1121 on Tuesday, 13 Jan, at 12:15．

Her presentation was easy to understand and her presentation materials are simple. she explained all information which displayed on her smart phone, so her speech had no omissions. In addition, she used simple words. Her speech was little fast, but I could understand the contents of her presentation.

However, her presentation materials has some confused slides. There many information, so these slide was hard to see. I think gathering many information is important, so she should form these information more easy to see. I think, making something graphs is one of good way.

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Essays 1-03b: Language Learning Presentations

I made a power point materials which about my language skills. At first, I'll introduce about Japanese and English skills when I was an elementary school student. Then, I'll presentation of my university life. In addition, I'm planning to continue to study English and Japanese, so I'll introduce about them too.

This is my language skills and my future plans. However, I couldn't introduce my first language skills when I was a child, so there are a part of my skills. Learning Japanese letter is one of my language skills, but I didn't pick up it this time. Actually, I couldn't give some examples which more specific, so I want to consider about my future plan more than this time.

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My Language Learning Story and Plans

When I was an elementary school student, I wasn't good at write Japanese very well. Especially, I struggle to remember Japanese _Kanji_ (Chinese character) becausethey looked very difficult form for me. So I got terrible points in mini tests, which test how to read and write Japanese _Kanji_ (Chinese character). In addition, I didn't like writing long sentences in Japanese. I tried to write more easily to understand contents, however each time I tried to them; I always told by my teacher that my Japanese composition is terrible to read. It was one of the big problems at that time. However, I have already started to study English at that time.

Actually, it was very easy and boring way to learn English because that way is just repeating what the teacher said. Of course, I couldn't understand English grammar. When I was a junior high school student, I started to study English seriously. When I studied elementary knowledge about English grammar, I was puzzled because I don't know any grammar. On the other hand, I remembered some English sentences because I repeated so many times. So I felt a little bit strange at that time.

I tried to remember more English words and grammar and I challenged to take English proficiency tests. There ware good target to study English for me. I have much time to study English more than about ten years ago. I am studying not only English grammar and words, but also how to read newspapers had written in English. Of course, each time I study more difficult spheres, I feel the lack of my vocabulary. For example, I felt some problems, especially when I attend speaking class. When I explain my ideas and information to people in English, I tend to use limited expressive ways. So, I feel my speech is very monotonous every time.

When I was a freshman, I learned German for the first time. At first, I worried about some rumors. When I started to learn German, I heard from someone that German has unique grammar and pronunciation of the alphabet. So, I didn't have much confidence, which learn German properly. However, learning German was a little bit easier for me because German grammar is similar to English. If I didn't well in English, I would have many problems with studying German.

At the same time, I learned how to write more understandable Japanese essay. It was a very strict lecture and there are many assignments. However, I'm grad to attend that class because I wasn't good at write a Japanese essay more theoretical.

Actually, I haven't thought what kind of job I get in the future and whether I continue with studying English. So I can't imagine about my future. However, writing skill is very useful thing for me because I will have much chance to explain much information for people in the future. So, I want to continue to increase my writing skill.

In addition, I am interested in Japanese novels, so I want much time to read them and understand. I think remembering words are an important skill because writing and reading is an essential skill for peoples' life regardless of language. So, I want to learn not only how to read more collectedly but also how to write more detail. In addition, I want to challenge more English qualifying examinations.

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Essay 1-02c: Combined Draft Essay Homework About KGU Life

This essay is composition homework which combination of two essay.

When freshman enter this university, they have many problems in their new lives at KGU. There are many changes for them, and they struggle to get used to their new lives. At first, They have to decide what subjects they attend. This experiences are difficult for them and they take many time to decide it. Of cause, they doesn't use to their new classes because they doesn't attend classes so long time. In addition, there classes are treat many deep knowledge about English and other subjects. They try to follow their classes and study more than before. However, in the end of the semester, some students fail some subjects. There are many reason why they fail their classes. For example, They are so busy because they have to go part-time job so late time, so they can't sleep very well and study. Getting credits is difficult for them for the first semester.

University life's at KGU starts after students finished with their high-school life's and most of them are becoming 19 years old. Their school life's changes so big . They become many free times for them selves. They are allowed to do part-time job to earn the money or, they are also allowed to take a driver licences to drive. there more things that they are allowed to do. Some of them are started to earn the money in the store . It could be so hard . on the other hand it could be so easy work. For example , some of their part-time job is server in the Hotel. they can earn good many but other way they say it is very hard work. The other say they got a job where they can earn good money. also they need not work so hard. Their so many choice of choosing the part-time job .

There are not only experiences but also good experiences for them. Many students go "Freshman camp" and make new friends in KGU. There are many people who have unique character. They gather when they attend some compulsory subjects and discuss many problems. In addition, they gather when they eat lunch at KGU. They can eat many kind of dishes in this university, but there are many students when lunch time. So they bought box meals and eat at outside or other rooms. They sometimes gather each other out of this university and hold kind of drinking party. They enjoy drink and talk each other. And they make many paper because the have to make a presentations sometime. They struggle to make them, but they enjoy to talk each other and make papers.

Some of them get drivers' licenses after they become university students. they can be learning how to drive and how hard the rules of society is. they can see the different world of the views when they are getting in the cars. some of them feel so exciting but the other feels so scare. many of them need not thing about the rules of the society when they were cycling the bike. but they become knowing that the rules are so important and they need to be carefully when they are driving.

When they be a sophomore, they get use to university lives and they try to some qualifications. For example, they take TOEIC test for the first time and they study very hard. That test is too long for them and they doesn't get good points. So, some people bring English notebooks of words and memory them. The other students bring English grammar books and review many times. They invent many way to study English because they want to get good point in TOEIC test. However, actually they have to study other subjects at same time, so studying what they want to study is too difficult for them.

In the university there many students who comes from other countries or prefectures. they become knowing new friends and seeing new world . some of them see the foreigners who came from Europe, Asia, or america. they are learning the different cultures and languages. they first feel difficult . because of the language . but many of them becoming good friends and having nice times.This is the one of good point of this university. Also you will get a class with the teacher who come from other countries. One of the teacher called Mr. Water-men. he is so cool , kind and also humorous. you can only take his class , when you are in the EIBEI GAKKA. some of them are extremely busy but all of the students are enjoying university life . I really recommend you to coming to KGU.  

They sometime attend club activity in free time and holidays. There are many kind of clubs. Some students do volunteer activity in club activity and make poster which report of their activities. On the other hand, sports club members are practice every day and they entry many Tournaments. They usually use university gym and tennis courts and game every week. In addition, they try to some way to practice themselves. They has many problems but they enjoy their university lives.

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Essay prep 1-02a: University Life

I'm go to KGU for about one year and I used to spend new university life. I usually have a many things to do, so I go to library at lunch time and do my work. In addition, I have to some work on my own computer. That work is very hard for me. However, I enjoying my university life!

When I attend some class and doing some problems, I can ask my friend sometime. In addition, I found a very interesting subject which I attended when I was flesh man.

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